Pre-Xmas rush

1. Thank you, monanotlisa for your beautiful home-made Christmas Card! It now has pride of place on our mantlepiece. *smooch*

2. I am mid-way through my yuletide pinchhit. Could some kind person spare a few minutes and beta it? It'll have to be a speedy job, as it is due at stupid o'clock tonight, but I'd feel a lot better if someone has had a go at it. It would be helpful if you are familiar with Brit comic book writers, but could be done without that. Pretty please? *bats lashes*