Firefly ficlet

[kangeiko]

Cannot make any WIP actually progress. It's becoming more like a list of WOPs (works on pause) rather than a list of WIPs. *sigh*

At any rate, I polished up something that had been kicking around in my notebook for a bit. It's my first attempt at Firefly fic, so you are not allowed to laugh. Constructive criticism is always welcome, tho.

This wee thing is set between 'Ariel' and 'War Stories', so spoilers and speculation for those.

Also? Constructive criticism. Don't make me beg. *chews lower lip*


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Comments

[kleio-the-muse.livejournal.com]

Hee, I just posted a little Firefly squee!:D And loved your ficlet - a very special place in hell, indeed *g*

If you're looking for icons, try ff_icons, mine are all from there.

[kangeiko]

am very behind on replying to feedback. *mortified* but -

thank you for the kind words, i am glad you enjoyed it. and, as per your rec, i have gone to ff_icons and availed myself of teh pretteh. :)

[atrata.livejournal.com]

Aw, poor Jayne. Except not. *grin* I love this. Your Book is excellent. As far as concrit, uh, I dunno. It seems like there's more Chinese than there is in the show, but it works, and that's really all I've got. This is quite cute. :)

[kangeiko]

hee! thank you. :) I was wondering about the amount of chinese in there, actually, so i shall tone it down before archival. yes.

*smooches*

[irradiatedsoup.livejournal.com]

*restrains self from yelling "do take advantage Jayne! DO DO DO!" because that would be uncouth and bad. Yep*

But yes, anyway hi. That was a fantastic wee story, and it fit perfectly. And yes, that. I'm great at feedback, but yes. I liked alot. :)

Thank you!

[kangeiko]

I'm so glad you liked it!

*restrains self from yelling "do take advantage Jayne! DO DO DO!" because that would be uncouth and bad. Yep*

except not. :) *is all for uncouth and bad, 'cause it leads to nekkid!jayne*