spy_santa fic due, mostly done, but thoroughly unbeta-ed. If a kind soul out there has an hour to spare this evening, please please please email me as I am this far away from binning the entire sorry thing. *kicks uncooperative story*
i am at a bit of a loss as to what to do with it, 'cause it just doesn't sound like who it's supposed to sound like, so, um, if you could just read it over and tell me which bits to change, that would be fabulous beyond belief.
but you are poorly, so if you're too poorly, get to bed instead, ok? *snuggles you some more*
you are sweet and lovely and i adore you. *smooches you*
ok, it is bad. be not afraid of the big stick of characterisation, for it is our friend and this story is not cooperating. please do hit it, i am expecting it. *winces*
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timeasmymeasure
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Date: 2006-01-06 08:34 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2006-01-06 09:31 pm (UTC)i am at a bit of a loss as to what to do with it, 'cause it just doesn't sound like who it's supposed to sound like, so, um, if you could just read it over and tell me which bits to change, that would be fabulous beyond belief.
but you are poorly, so if you're too poorly, get to bed instead, ok? *snuggles you some more*
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Date: 2006-01-06 09:34 pm (UTC)Let me finish and post mine real quick, and I'll do yours, okay? Send it over already.
Shan't take long...
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Date: 2006-01-06 09:44 pm (UTC)ok, it is bad. be not afraid of the big stick of characterisation, for it is our friend and this story is not cooperating. please do hit it, i am expecting it. *winces*