ok, have made a start

[kangeiko]

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Only a tiny wee bit of that is actual text; the rest is bullet points regarding everything except the main body of the argument. Now, suppose that I were to finish this by the end of these ten days, as I fully intend to do. Would some kind soul be interested in reading it over and letting me know what they think? I'd owe you cake. And stuff.